cuidadora: More feedback! hyper Thank you.

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Loved the banter while Lois is hanging from the flagpole. /lol/ While reading it I was picturing Clark's amused expression and the steam coming out of Lois' ears.
Oh, good. That's what I was aiming for. There was a little bit of that in the original scene from canon, I just extended it.

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I really like how you recapped their activities at Fort Truman without rewriting every scene.
Just trying to move the plot on quickly without losing all the fun stuff. Glad it worked! thumbsup

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