Ooh, I really liked this! As a writer, I'm always trying to think of details that Clark would always be hearing and filtering out, but I've never thought of so many! I was really impressed by how much detail and how many different senses you were able to draw out. The urgency was very clear throughout even though it was, in effect, a list. And I love how her heartbeat was always there, in between the hundreds of other things! I had to smile when I saw that it was only ten seconds too -- and people think Superman is boring! Whole epics pass in seconds of his life! Great job -- I'm in awe of this little story!
