I LOVE this. What a great concept. It reminds me of the writing exercises I did in my college creative writing class, only we would take only one sense to focus on.

I love the Matrixy "bullet time" feel of this. Every little thing noticed and highlighted. In my own head, I heard a very slow heartbeat (Clark's) ticking off every couple of things noticed.

Well done! I particularly loved the detail of the older, lead based paint in some places messing with his x-ray vision. Totally inspired!


Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon