MikeM

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I loved the "Clark Jerome Kent!!!" part and the bantering back and forth regarding his dropping his 'friend' duties. The explanation of why he came to her as Superman instead of Clark was a nice fill in from the previous chapter. Historically he has had that problem and I liked Lois calling him out on that.

Hi There! wave

A number of FoLC's told me this was their favorite line from Part 2! Lois was rather peeved at Clark for getting involved with Lana and now she thinks her rival is in the apartment with him? Our favorite lady reporter is seeing crimson! LOL!

It never set well with me that Clark would romance Lois in his alter ego and then be just a friend as Clark. In this story she gets to put him on the 'hot seat'.

Again, thank you so much for posting the cup! grin

Last edited by Morgana; 07/21/18 07:39 PM.
Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.