Originally Posted by LMA
This is great!!!

I am really enjoying the feel of this story. The style and how you are writing it. The subtle differences here and there--Lois and Clark's first day working together, how they are talking and relating to each other, Clark's offer to work for free. It's enough 'change' to really make the beginning of a story we all know so well seem very fresh and new. You completely have me guessing what's coming up...will it be what I know from the show or something different?

Also, really enjoying the dialogue between all the characters. It sounds very real, and it makes the scenes very easy to picture in my head while reading.

Oh--and Lois mistaking Clark's last name for "Kemp". rotflol clap lol. GREAT detail. Loved it!

Laura

Thanks, Laura! I hate retelling the same story in exactly the same way, unless it's specifically episode-related. I like to give something "fresh" to the readers, so to speak, even it's just subtle differences here and there to make it something a little more unique.

Glad you're enjoying the story so far and that you like the dialogue. Lois and Clark are so easy to write for! smile

More to come on the weekend...

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