This is great!!!
I am really enjoying the feel of this story. The style and how you are writing it. The subtle differences here and there--Lois and Clark's first day working together, how they are talking and relating to each other, Clark's offer to work for free. It's enough 'change' to really make the beginning of a story we all know so well seem very fresh and new. You completely have me guessing what's coming up...will it be what I know from the show or something different?
Also, really enjoying the dialogue between all the characters. It sounds very real, and it makes the scenes very easy to picture in my head while reading.
Oh--and Lois mistaking Clark's last name for "Kemp".
. GREAT detail. Loved it!
Laura
