Wonderful job! Like Virginia stated, you've really brought so much into MX. It's never been an episode that I've particularly loved, but thanks to your writing, I appreciate it more.
In the original episode, while a bit strained, Clark was there for her. Cared for her. And still, it was a hard time for Lois. This universe, this Lois, has a lot more to deal with...most notably, not feeling the connection to her best friend. You've done a fantastic job of showing how much harder this life is--without Clark.
I'm really curious as to when things will open up between them. When they honestly talk. Hash things out. I'm hoping for some real conversation--about feelings, about the hurt of the last few months (on both sides).
I really have enjoyed this story--I'm so excited to see where it goes!
Laura
