sara, what can i say? that was beautiful. much better than the original. laugh lovely introspection, great conversations, wonderful ending. congratulations on a very good start to your fic writing career. smile

Paul

p.s. for some reason, i'm still seeing a lot of these: </st1:place> they always come after the word "clark," but not after every "clark." not sure what's going on, but if you could delete them, it would be nice. smile


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