Hi Shallowford,
I have finished reading the story; what fun! I agree with the high points others mentioned (especially Lex's non-death-defying plummet from the stage). I also liked the way you made it clear what a good thing it is that Wonder Woman keeps such close tabs on her lasso. I shudder to think what such technology could be used for in the wrong hands. And having Bobby Bigmouth save the day was a stroke of brilliance.
Well done!
Joy,
Lynn
