Sorry I arrive late at the comment party
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And yet I have to confirm my initial impression: you definitely have the potential to write longer stories!
I like the fact that, in spite of having a love declaration in the first stages of the story, you refrained from excessive romanticism: there's something refreshing in reading a story with just a spoonful of sugar in it (and not all the jar).
I'll wait for the next story!
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