Oh no, oh no, oh no... almost forgot!! I have to comment, because I really loved this:
“Lois?” Something in his voice made her look up at him. He was going to be serious again. Well, they didn’t have a lot of time left for serious conversations...
“Yeah?”
“Are you... disappointed in me? Do you think I’ve let you down?”
She stumbled, and he caught her, held her steady. What was he talking about? Let her down? How?
I was waiting for something like this, but I still teared up at this part; caught off guard! So nice how you did it! His uncertainty, her confusion was so great
In character, especially at this point, in these circumstances... WONDERFUL! This whole scene just broke my heart in two... ahh..
okay. Done now.
MORE SOON!
~NICOLE
