I think you summed up Clark's feelings well. I can only imagine how much of a blow it was to him to being doing his job, only to have Luthor take the credit for saving Lois' life. (Thus starting Lois' starry-eyed, brainless, liking of Lex.)
Requiem has always been one of my least favorite episodes. I liked getting to know about Lois and Sam's dysfunctional relationship, but the whole boxing thing was just strange and out of place, and then Lex comes in at the last second to steal the save and Lois' affections. Overall, it leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
Regardless of my issues with the episode, I did like your story. Again, short and powerful. Great job.
