Wow! More...please?
Completely echo everyone's comments. So full of feeling, and so powerfully written. And SO many options of where to go, where you could take us! It really is amazing how you can convey so much into a smaller piece. You really have the ability to pull the reader in
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Having recently become a huge fan of your work--voraciously read through "In Time, Somewhere", "Vagrant", and "Homecoming" very recently
--would love to see where you could take this story.
Awesome job
Laura
