Impressive!

Your writing conveys in a few hundred words what it would take many of us three chapters.

Excellent story. If Clark thinks he can live on this new world and not meet up with Lois Lane, he's crazy.

This story can go in so many directions. For instance; since Kal-El's ship never landed in Smallville, what happened to Jonathan and Martha?

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.