What a great chapter, DC
. I'd been wanting to read since you posted, but just got the time this morning. Definitely worth the wait
.
Me, being a
huge fan of WAFF (and even that is probably an understatement
), really enjoyed all these moments between Lois and Clark...
First off, I really loved your dialog. It's very authentic-sounding, so much like the series, between the two of them. It's incredibly easy to picture 'scenes' unfolding as I read your work--and because of that, this part totally felt real, right. You could sense their friendship--their strained friendship--and the need that they had to talk it all out. And then the 'talk' itself...I really enjoyed it
. Clark's confusion about everything these last few days and his questioning about how to get back to normal with Lois. Lois' feelings of rejection from Clark--which would have been hard for her to take, I'm sure, considering the experience with Lex, etc. They needed to hash everything out--and Lois taking the lead was great to see.
I'm so glad that the 'date' is going to happen--and I'm happy that the air has been cleared. Boy though...getting the whole 'Superman' thing out there--that's going to be a big stumbling block, I get the feeling.
Can't wait for their tomorrow night date (to be read next weekend
--gunna be a
long week, DC).
Great job!
Laura
