Originally Posted by LMA
Having thoughts about the title, too...so very curious to keep reading, DC!

I really enjoyed this chapter. You created an intimate and caring night between Lois and Clark--despite everything horrible that had happened to Lois that evening. I, too, felt really bad for Lois when she mentioned reliving the moments with Lex while she tried to sleep. And also, when she mentioned potentially being damaged goods to Clark. Bottom line, she really needs and is lucky to have Clark's constant support and love.

I've enjoyed how you've written Clark. The feelings for Lois he has, his worry about telling her he's Superman. How he almost slipped and told her he loved her. So curious to see when he's totally honest with her about his abilities--and I really hope Lois can understand his deception so as not to completely wreck her trust in him.

I am SO enjoying this story, DC. Will be thrilled for the next post hyper.

Awesome job!
Laura

Many thanks for the kind words! Loving that you and others are already thinking about the title and what it may mean.

I loved writing these moments between Lois and Clark. They are a pretty easy pair to write for, I think. And I love the opportunity to sneak in WAFFs where I can. I think it's a safe bet to say that Lois is going to have more love and support from Clark than she could ever hope for.

Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon