Yea! Another part! clap
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She was suddenly overwhelmed by his presence, directly behind her. He was so large, so strong, so handsome. She whirled away, gulping and hyperventilating. She needed some way to get in control. He was going to hear her rapidly beating heart soon. Perhaps he already had!
devil She's NEVER going to last for long! He's already so adorable, and she's already worried that her pretended attitude is going to chase him off...no, this game is not going to last two years! grin

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She'd worked her buns off specifically so that she'd be here, at the Daily Planet, just to meet him.
Awww! That's sweet.

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Ten years ago these things, these feelings, would have meant something completely different to her. Her parent's marriage had been full of arguments, resentment, selfishness and blame. But she lived with the memories of a different marriage now. A marriage that was good, pure, giving, supportive.
Awww! That's even sweeter! This Lois isn't as worried about the potential for a romantic relationship because she knows she's destined to be in a great one. It's interesting to see how that perception has changed the way she interprets the actions of other people, too.

Looking forward to the next part. thumbsup


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink