This story had me laughing from the first paragraph. I really, truly enjoyed it. I loved the way you edged her feelings about Clark into it, even if she immediately denied them to herself. So VERY Lois!
I also enjoyed the last where she commits herself (using the Godzilla toy as a reminder) to making herself worth being a partner with Clark. That really did not come across in the episode. She did complain about it in the next episode (I'm not so scarred, and he's not so exciting) but then that seem to disappear and by the time of GGGOH their partnership just seem to be the normal thing.
Well played Susan!
Mike
