Terry,
A wonderful chapter, more downers probably to come but this chapter was very entertaining and interesting. I, like Virginia, loved the way you had Clark and the kids react to Lois' homecoming. A real eye-opener for Lois.
I especially like the way you got the kids involved in the story in a much larger sense. Loved the Jon approaching Burt about the medical prognosis of his mother and the way the boy played the doctor into giving him more information that Burt was wanting to give. Also cutely played with the scheme Jon and Marta came up with to get Lois and Clark's mind off the problems and onto them (the kids).
Can't wait until the next chapter!
Mike
