What a lovely story, Victoria!
Having been through a couple of anxious moments in the labour ward, I thought you captured the feelings of fear and helplessness really well.
I love how you managed to give us a happy ending without jumping forward in time or leaving us hanging and just hoping things would work out.
X-ray vision sure comes in handy occasionally!
I hope you and your family had a wonderful Christmas. God bless.
Corrina.