clap I love it!! Can't wait to see more. Love the premise-- at first I was thinking that it was set in black and white times or something (I had no set timeline in my head, but for some reason that's what popped up). goofy I love TOGOM rewrites, and I have high hopes for this one too! I'm glad you've got a schedule set, gonna prepare myself. grin


Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain