Hi Virginia,
Thanks for the FDK!
After the last part you seemed to be disappointed that the fight had been so short. I hope that now you are more satisfied. A good warrior doesn’t shoot all of his arrows in a single battle. He saves some for the rest of the war. The fight scene wasn’t finished; it had just reached a convenient pause point.
You are right about the snicker. It has been removed.
RE: Luthor. He was around for the entire first season. I suppose I could get rid of him early in this rewrite, but it is so much fun to play with him, don’t you think?
RE: Perry’s comment – that is straight from the script although I did change a few things around it to fit the new reality.
Corrected the ‘J’ on Jimmy too.
As far as Lex and Nigel, I guess you’ll just have to keep reading. HiM and ASU are in the can and I’m working on Witness.
