I'm late, but so glad I finally caught up!

And, oh, my heart was breaking for poor Clark in this segment, Dave. And for Lois too. It must be so difficult for her to handle this. whinging

As always, the pure, lyrical rhythm of your words lends such resonance to the emotions you've captured. I think that's the thing I love most about your writing, Dave. The sheer emotion you pour into each segment. Beautiful.

Plus, some seriously WAFFy dialogue.

Liked the way you solved the chiffon question. <g>

Right...thank goodness part three is already up. There is some small pro to catching up later than everyone else. wink

LabRat smile


Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers