Chris,
This was a great part!
Thank you for resolving the probable angst of Clark's origins so sweetly. I love the way you write this Lois and I can understand that Clark's revelation would be a
I really liked the fact that their dialogue about giving-up/not-giving-up showed Clark as the more determined (and loved his correction of "stubborn') and then the switch to:
She twisted around, finding his mouth with hers, but there was something absentminded about the act. She turned her attention back towards the screen. CJ, wishing that he could stay that focused, forced his gaze to follow hers.
to show that they are similar in that respect as well.
Can't wait for the next part!
Avia (who is going to corner Paul and find out how to beg nicely enough to get the next part posted tonight. Pretty please?
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