*ahem*
Wow! Thanks for the fdk
Sara - Only three pieces? Pfft :p
CC...
Love him hearing Lois save herself. That was my favorite line.
That's my favourite line too, so *thank you* for pointing it out
I had to be physically restrained from posting the rest after I'd read your fdk. Wow
James - I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you liked Echo too
Driven to keep reading... that's what I was aiming for, yes, exactly
Kathy - I have buzz? Are you sure it was this story?
It *is* finished, but... well, let's just say it'll be getting a sequel
Lab - Don't be silly now, I love both my fdk threads equally
You've said the magic words... rhythm... hopefully you'll be able to remember that, because...
I have some small doubts as to whether it's a style that can be sustained over more than a vignette and into four segments.
Me too
But we'll find out
Too many wonderful little moments to pick out, but I'm just such a fan of the way you put words together, David. You tell a wonderful story, the plots are intriguing and the characters are the ones I love. But beyond all of that, you give us an extra bonus of words crafted just so for maximum impact that resonate in the mind long after they're read.
Is there a Labrat fan club I can join?
Sara, CC, Liz, James, Kathy, Kae, Jen, Maria, Ethnica, Sheila, Incognito, Lab... thank you all so much. I'm glad you enjoyed part one... I just hope you don't hate me when it's over
