I never heard of Early Edition, but the premise is interesting. Not sure what the EE character can do, since he won't have all the facts... especially the CK=S one!
You can check in Fanfic Related under the "Betas looking for work!" thread to find someone who can help you polish the grammar/spelling bits. There weren't many, but fixing them will make your story read much better.
I look forward to the next section!
Hazel
