Wendy,

I read this story before the boards crashed today and I had a really good comment ready to post. I hope I remember it smile .

I loved the conversation between Lois and Henderson. I LOLed through their entire banter.

The introspection was just wonderful. I loved how they both fixated on the kiss they had shared! So great!

I agree with Kathy about the glass. How could he use his heat vision through the glass without any adverse consequenses? I always thought that was why he pulled his glasses down to use his powers.

I can't wait for the next part!

- Alicia smile1


Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve