WOW! What great feedback. All this information is terrific. Keep it coming. I'll definitely have to rework my opening scene blush (yes, you told me so, Iolanthe), but I think the other ones will still work... but now I can add more meat to them thar bones. laugh

What are some of your favorite "Bat" tools?

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.