Great story. Great ride.

A short vignette about Luthor coming to terms with his failure (i.e. getting ripped a new one by Lane and Kent's Grand Expose) would have been nice. Oh, well, not A-plot can be nice, too.

If I had to pick a favorite line, this would be it.
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"I don't know what you're implying, Lex, but I love my husband! In sickness or in health."
Lois verbalizing her love so completely anti climatic. Not even noticing it herself that she is doing it.

Michael

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