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Posted By: Brooke FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 08:36 AM
I definatly need a box of tissues here! What a nice way to end the story! I am intirgued by the idea of Lois and Clark having more children (great for a sequel!) Though it was too short, I thought these characters were just as incrediable! I was glad to see that Superman was back in action! Now I beg you for a Sequel, because I am going to miss reading this story so much, I feel as if I know these characters personally and want to know so much about their new 'happy' life together!

Please Please do a follow-up! It would make me so happy! Please! clap
Posted By: SuperRoo Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 08:49 AM
It's over!?! whinging

Thanks! It was a fun trip.

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Well I guess Clark's adventure should end. That little girl sounds soo adorable. I have the most cutest baby pictured in my head. I really enjoyed how you closed up with Perry. It was perfect.

Now hopefully Clark won't be a lunkhead in the future.

Umm, no he'll be a lunkhead.
Posted By: Julia Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 09:31 AM
Is it really over??? wave
Posted By: Simona Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 10:02 AM
the worse part in this story:
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THE END
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Simona smile
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 11:32 AM
Simply...fabulous! What a ride. I had my doubts at points that Lois and Clark would make it through, but everything turned about fabulously in the end.

JD
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Posted By: Gabriele Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 11:32 AM
This has been a story which have its unpleasent moments (when Lois was *very* unpleasent to Clark), but it came beautifully to the end.

Perry was cute, as always.

Thank you both and many happy returns as a team! party
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 11:36 AM
Hi,

Great story. hyper Beautiful!

MAF hyper
Posted By: avia Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 02:07 PM
Thanks you gals for sharing this life journey with us.

It was heart wrenching, heart warming, and full of misunderstandings and beautiful resolutions as well as credible personal growth by some of the characters.

Thank you for writing such a unique story and a great big thank you for sharing the fruit of your labor with us.

Avia
Posted By: mmprincess Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 03:42 PM
Is it really over?! I too, am hoping for a sequel! Thanks for this beautiful story.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/03/04 05:18 PM
Thanks that was a really nice ending. Laura
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/04/04 12:52 AM
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Jose hyper

P.S. Next story together... or alone, we don't mind laugh
Posted By: Mad Dog Lane Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/04/04 02:46 PM
goofy

Without much more ado, I'd like to tell, girls, that in the end, this story wasn't about a gift Lois was giving Clark to save his life.

This is a story about two authors, SQD and Jenni, giving us, readers, a real Gift For Life.

MDL. (Whose tears won't stop rolling on her cheeks unless these two writers start working on a funny story immediately.)
Posted By: Jenni Debb Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/05/04 02:29 AM
Hi,

I'd just like to thank everyone who stayed with this very long story and who posted such wonderful fdk.

It makes such a difference to both SQD and myself to know that our work is appreciated.

Your wonderful comments have made our day, or month, or maybe even year. wink

Yours Jenni
Posted By: CC Aiken Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 10/06/04 08:00 AM
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His father had been right the day he said Mira would accomplish many things in her life, and she'd already begun. By saving Clark's life, she'd unknowingly saved thousands of others. Yet the lives that mattered most to Clark, were those of his family. Yes, Mira would do great things in time to come, and he would be there to see her grow.
A sweet wrap-up to a really great, really unique story.

I struggled with parts of this- Lois's behavior early in their marriage, and Clark's announcement in front of family and friends that he wasn't putting his daughter through the transplant.

For me, that took these two characters's very worst traits- Lois's insecurity and Clark's lunk-headness- to an extreme that was difficult to handle. But I like that you didn't shy away from the ugly parts of this. That you trusted your readers to struggle with the hard parts.

All of that makes the happy ending so satisfying, as it didn't come cheap and easy. And it felt so very real.

Would love to see something by the two of you again. You make a great team!

CC
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 11/18/07 03:02 PM
Great story. Great ride.

A short vignette about Luthor coming to terms with his failure (i.e. getting ripped a new one by Lane and Kent's Grand Expose) would have been nice. Oh, well, not A-plot can be nice, too.

If I had to pick a favorite line, this would be it.
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"I don't know what you're implying, Lex, but I love my husband! In sickness or in health."
Lois verbalizing her love so completely anti climatic. Not even noticing it herself that she is doing it.

Michael
Posted By: Sheila Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 08/23/09 08:10 PM
...And it was just a wonderful this time!

~Sheila
Posted By: Sheila Re: FDK- A Gift for Life 18 - 07/19/10 10:40 PM
Wow! I've re-read this story for the umpteenth time and I am still overblown with the flow of emotions. Just a wonderful masterpiece!

One thing though...what was the wedding gift from Lex?

~Sheila
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