His father had been right the day he said Mira would accomplish many things in her life, and she'd already begun. By saving Clark's life, she'd unknowingly saved thousands of others. Yet the lives that mattered most to Clark, were those of his family. Yes, Mira would do great things in time to come, and he would be there to see her grow.
A sweet wrap-up to a really great, really unique story.
I struggled with parts of this- Lois's behavior early in their marriage, and Clark's announcement in front of family and friends that he wasn't putting his daughter through the transplant.
For me, that took these two characters's very worst traits- Lois's insecurity and Clark's lunk-headness- to an extreme that was difficult to handle. But I like that you didn't shy away from the ugly parts of this. That you trusted your readers to struggle with the hard parts.
All of that makes the happy ending so satisfying, as it didn't come cheap and easy. And it felt so very real.
Would love to see something by the two of you again. You make a great team!
CC
