Anna, I don't think you have anything to worry about! I love the way you ended your story.

But, I don't really have any advice. I never feel like I can write a good ending to longer stories. It always feels like I get frustrated wtih the story and just slap on an ending. So I spent all that time on the first 100+ pages and the last 5-6 are just cliche and boring and too fast. So, I guess, maybe I am not the person to answer this question. wink


Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve