Wow, Kaylle, great start. Although I don't like the sound of things that you aren't going to give us a definite ending... especially because I'm seeing a bit of Lois and Clark in Caleb and Rachel. I really like the title and how you're fitting the "watching" part into the fic. I mean, of course we know in real life that people who watch the objects of their love/lust all the time are really scary stalkers, in fiction they're always handsome (or beautiful) and wonderful people. If only we had some assurance that you were going to make it all right at the end. As for Alan... maybe he'll be the impetus to get Caleb off his butt.
Next part soon!
