Kaylle
Thanks for reposting!
A great start! I love the premise.
Rachel and Cal definitely remind me of two other people.
She shuddered. No more nights on the roof. Decisively, she smiled at Alan. "I'd love to."
Yikes! I have a feeling that I'm not going to like Alan. :rolleyes:
I'm looking forward to reading the next part.
Tricia
