Wow, talk about nearly instant gratification! ML, I was so excited to see that your muse was tickled by this idea and was impressed with how quickly you wrote the opening scene.
I love the way you set the stage, visually...
A slow stream of smoke lazily drifted towards the ceiling...
and
Rough cut stone walls reflected the glow of a multitude of fires that seemed to burn of their own volition around the room.
As well as set the tone for the story...
Deodorant advertisers claiming such things as ‘strong enough for a man’ should get a load of this place.
I bow to your greatness and can hardly wait for more.
Brenda
