Smooth. It's lines like this that discourage me from writing more L&C.
Don't let lines like
anything stop you from writing!
Actually, the end of that sentence didn't even come out the way I wanted it to either. But I loved the first part of it, up until "spiralling." I think I originally meant to finish it up with another reference to entropy, and therefore chaos, but I had a brain fart while I was typing that sentence and couldn't think of it until afterward.
What's my point? I think the point I'm trying to make here is that even if you think your own writing isn't good enough,
post it anyway--there's bound to be someone who at least appreciates the effort.
