Well, that seemed like a good place to leave things

ML

Oh, that is a brilliant part ending!

Oh, I hope this is one the times that you are coming back today with the next part!

Dan should never star in a role that Clark Kent is supposed to play!

FANTASTIC part!

I am hoping and praying that the smoldering hot scene in "JSN" remains the same--none of this Clark/Mayson, Lois/Dan stuff <shudder>

other than that, I fully enjoy this story!

Superb, after each part I feel like saying "more more"

So it seems to me that after Spenser Spenser's island, Smiley's retreat would be the first time Kent would see Lane... has she cut her hair in this reality? Would Kent say something about that?

Just waiting to see if Lane and Kent move forward (goodbye to Dan and Mayson) or backward (L&D, C&M move to the next level - hope not)) when they see each other with their unwanted significant others... I mean isn't 5-6 months dating Dan | Mayson more than enough for Lane | Kent? (j/k.. sort of)

I am also speculating that the time is coming for Lane to find out about Kent's abilities.. if she's figured it out at all in this alternate reality.

Lois' line about Clark's dual persona was fantastic.

argh.

more soon.

inbox is waiting. seriously.

dan and mayson could be frozen and go from there...

Carol

Great part ML. Can't wait for Dan and Mayson to meet. They are such a sweet couple. I hope Larry agrees.

And just how are L&D and C&M going to handle the sleeping accommodations. This is going to be good

Michael

This really is getting better and better, but the waiting is seriously killing me. I'm really not good with suspense

I would like to point out that I do editing for L&C fic, so you know, if you need some assistance, I'd be more than happy to help, with no ulterior motives in wanting to be able to read the whole thing in one sitting or anything...

Great part, and a great ending, but this needs an immediate follow-up. This tale has me completely intrigued.

I am loving this fanfic also...

Please post the new part soon!

I am stalking the boards every hour or so with the hope of a new part appearing

The waiting is killing me.

Oh, good point. (Rushing off now to add that to the story - after all, if Lane hadn't cut her hair somewhere along the way, then someone at the Planet would have commented on Lois' hair when they first arrived at the Planet).

I could be wrong, but I'm starting to get the distinct impression that you guys are anxious for the next part.

ML

Stop teasing! Oh go on, post it. You know you want to

ML, addicts do horrible things in order to get their next fix. You posted part 30 37! hours ago. Come on..., give us more. Please?
Pretty please

Michael

Well, but what happens if I post it and you guys all hate it and it wasn't what you were expecting and then you'll feel all let down and I'll feel all bad and... Oh, dear. Maybe I should never post again. It's probably so much better in your imaginations. I really don't want to ruin that

ML

Send it to me and I'll let you know if it's okay. In fact, I could read the rest of the whole thing for you and let you know what works and what doesn't...

Carol

ML, people know who you are. Going into hiding might not work when a nice group of enforcers is gently asking you to resume your posting.

See, there they are:


But since it's almost two days by now and you are looking in on the boards, this means part 31 is going to be up sometime soon. Or when I wake up tomorrow. So if you post anywhere between the next 4-7 hours I'm good.

Michael

Brilliant.

And who knows maybe Dan and Mayson get 86'ed by lightning...

JD

In four hours it will be the 17th - two days since I last posted.

Anyway...

Or Lois will... oops! Did I just say that? I wonder what that means

It's already the 17th in some parts of the world...

I say go for it .

Carol

It's 17th July 10.27am in Syd Australia

We have the Pope over here for World Youth Day and I am sending out a prayer that you will post the next part...like yesterday already

You're right! I'm late! I'll get posting immediately after all... Hey! Wait a minute! This is some kind of trick isn't it.

ML

Hey - that was like 45m ago - shouldn't you have posted by now?!?!

Carol

No. No. No.

That was just a trick. In fact, I think that Little Tornato is just pretending to be from Australia to get me to post early. After all, she didn't call me 'mate' once in her post

ML

But... but... but... /sputters

It's tomorrow in lots of places now... Whether she's in Australia or not...

I'm not above begging, but really, if you'd just send the whole thing to that special ML FIC inbox complete with chocolate and appropriate punctuation and a place for extraneous words to rest until they're needed elsewhere, all of this nagging, begging, pestering, badgering and so on would just go away...

Carol

Good onya mate, its 1.10pm in Syd Australia now.

Please tell me you will post it now.

Cheers Mate

Little Tornado

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