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Corrina.

What a wonderful chapter! I'm curious where you will go from this point. Please post soon.

This was a hard read. I was so afraid Kent would run away. I am glad he didn't.

I am really gald he told Lois that it had only been a week. I had not realized that she did not realize how recently it was.

I still wish he would tell her how he got to be the way he was, but I guess it is still hard, and he still thinks he will not recover.

I love that Matymbou is a real friend to Lois. It's interesting how she reacts with the Lois instincts and yet has matured enough, or learned to trust enough, to listen to what Matymbou has to say to her about Kent.

I love that Clark is slowly learning those same lessons from the Bangala.

There's still a major hurdle coming...can't wait to see what happens!

Amber

Still here. Still reading. No time for real FDK.

I'm glad Clark made it clear to Lois that he only left Lana (or vice versa) a week earlier. While that had been clear to us Readers, I believe some of us had forgotten that she didn't know this factoid yet.

Kate
Well, I'm trying to wind up the story. Just not having much success.

John

Progress!

Amber

That's one of the most fun things about fanfic - put the characters in a different situation and explore the effect of those changes.

Virginia It's easy for everyone to forget the facts of who knows what when the story is dripping out so slowly.

Thanks to everyone still reading,

Corrina.