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Hi,

Great part. thumbsup


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Great story thumbsup

Interesting twist, that Lois loved Clark for the last year and knew it!

I also really liked the epiloge. I think it's a really sweet ending, with Perry knowing and leaving subtle hints to them. But I am curious about your other idea for the epiloge. Maybe you can post it, too and we readers can choose, which one we like best laugh

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I had forgotten this!! smile

I liked the banter between Lois and Clark

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Great story!
I love stories from Lois' POV, and this one is done so well.

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This was great, Jo! smile Really awesome.

Keep writing!
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Jo, thank you for posting all the rest of this story in one piece! thumbsup

And I really enjoyed it. Loved Clark turning up on Lois's doorstep to ask her why she's resigned - and, yes, I'd like to know just how he found out and what his reaction was too, but I understand that, with the story being told from Lois's POV, it's not possible to show us that. Maybe a companion story from Clark's POV?? laugh

Lois so driven to the edge of her control that she actually told Clark how she felt about him was wonderful. Loved seeing it, and seeing Clark's response. Great stuff!!

Now we want your next story! wildguy


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Thanks for reposting this. smile
A lovely story!

I'm glad that Clark goes to find out why Lois resigned. I love how she tells him how she feels. smile1
I enjoyed it immensely.

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Jo,

So nicely done. And I really appreciated the humor in what was a heavy scene. That Lois blurts out "Chocolate" and then checks her head for an exit wound to see where her mind must have burst out. So funny and smart.

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Oh crap!

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