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FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9172 12/15/03 03:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana KathyB OP Merriwether
OP KathyB Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana	After the big build up in part 6 -- not to mention that you've had two whole days to come up with your own conversations! -- I hope Lois's response is what you were looking for. All comments welcome and appreciated. Thanks for hanging in there with me while this was being posted. Kathy

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9173 12/15/03 04:25 AM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 78 Toronto Allie Freelance Reporter
Allie Freelance Reporter Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 78 Toronto	Great Ending -- I really enjoyed the whole story. And thank you thank you for posting so regularly. I was so looking forward to reading it today -- and there it was right on schedule ! Allie

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9174 12/15/03 04:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	But... but... it was all sweetness and waff. We're firmly entrenched into the 'reasonable Lois' era of fanfic revelations. Earlier all the fics had to have the angry ranting and hurt/betrayed Lois revelations. Now we are in the other camp. For a story based entirely on waff and yucky stuff this was well done. But I can't help but think it couls have been better with a few nasty whams added. (Like someone skiing off a cliff). Still, I guess there are one of two people out there who like their waffy fics uncomplicated with whams and such (though I can't imagine who they'd be). And for them (and the rest of us who can OCCASIONALLY live without the excitement) this was a typically well done effort. Tank (who hopes that once this Christmas season is finally over that he can get back to reading fics with some really nasty whams)

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9175 12/15/03 06:09 AM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 78 Toronto Allie Freelance Reporter
Allie Freelance Reporter Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 78 Toronto	Tank, At the risk of getting off topic here, I feel I have to stick up for this style of story. I like WHAM's a lot too... but uncertainty and fearing someone's reaction can be quite angst ridden when well written (as this is) Allie

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9176 12/15/03 07:36 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Yay! A great ending to a great story! Quote Lois moved to the opposite side of the wall. "Oh, sure," she grumbled. "You're willing to have sex in an outdoor hot tub, but heaven forbid anyone hear us talking." Clark rolled his eyes as he climbed out of the water. "Lois, we weren't going to have se--" He stopped and stared at her, eyes wide. "Were we?" She made a sound of exasperation. "Well, not now!" That really got me going there. Great job, I loved it all! Jen "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9177 12/15/03 07:41 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9178 12/15/03 09:05 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada G gerry Columnist
gerry Columnist G Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 543 Canada	Perfect ending for a perfect story. I'm going to put this away so that when I need some comfort food (or story), I'll be able to pull this and part I out and enjoy. Thanks Kathy. gerry

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9179 12/17/03 02:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Kathy, wonderful ending and like Tank said it was all sweetness and waff merry

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9180 12/19/03 01:00 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana KathyB OP Merriwether
OP KathyB Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,597 Indiana	Popping back in to say a big thank you to everyone who has been reading the story and posting feedback. I appreciate your nice words very much. I'm delighted that you've all enjoyed the story. (And Jen, thanks for highlighting that exchange ... it's one of those lines that would crack me up every time I would see it, and I was just hoping that it wasn't just funny in my head. <g>) Thanks, everyone! Kathy

Re: FDK: Momentum 2 (part 7/7) FINAL #9181 12/19/03 10:09 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Kathy WOW! Thank you for a superbly written story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia

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