After the big build up in part 6 -- not to mention that you've had two whole days to come up with your own conversations! -- I hope Lois's response is what you were looking for.

All comments welcome and appreciated. Thanks for hanging in there with me while this was being posted.

Kathy

Great Ending --

I really enjoyed the whole story. And thank you thank you for posting so regularly. I was so looking forward to reading it today -- and there it was right on schedule !

Allie

But... but... it was all sweetness and waff.

We're firmly entrenched into the 'reasonable Lois' era of fanfic revelations. Earlier all the fics had to have the angry ranting and hurt/betrayed Lois revelations. Now we are in the other camp.

For a story based entirely on waff and yucky stuff this was well done. But I can't help but think it couls have been better with a few nasty whams added. (Like someone skiing off a cliff).

Still, I guess there are one of two people out there who like their waffy fics uncomplicated with whams and such (though I can't imagine who they'd be). And for them (and the rest of us who can OCCASIONALLY live without the excitement) this was a typically well done effort.

Tank (who hopes that once this Christmas season is finally over that he can get back to reading fics with some really nasty whams)

Tank,
At the risk of getting off topic here, I feel I have to stick up for this style of story.
I like WHAM's a lot too...
but uncertainty and fearing someone's reaction can be quite angst ridden when well written
(as this is)

Allie

Yay! A great ending to a great story!

That really got me going there.

Great job, I loved it all!
Jen

Hi,

Great part.

Perfect ending for a perfect story. I'm going to put this away so that when I need some comfort food (or story), I'll be able to pull this and part I out and enjoy.

Thanks Kathy.

gerry

Kathy,
wonderful ending
and like Tank said
it was all sweetness and waff
merry

Popping back in to say a big thank you to everyone who has been reading the story and posting feedback. I appreciate your nice words very much.

I'm delighted that you've all enjoyed the story.

(And Jen, thanks for highlighting that exchange ... it's one of those lines that would crack me up every time I would see it, and I was just hoping that it wasn't just funny in my head. <g>)

Thanks, everyone!

Kathy

Kathy

WOW! Thank you for a superbly written story.
I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia