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commennts go here
A WHAM warning was posted in the TANK ending string.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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I think the flashbacks do a lot of good in establishing why this was so hard for Clark. We see even more of his interactions with Lois and see how it is even harder.
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Thank you John for that FDK!!!
I went round and round with one of my beta readers on the issue of the flashbacks. He was of the opinion that they were unnecessary. My other beta and I felt the opposite.
You have vindicated my decision.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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My Bberry hiccuped and double posted.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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Good Entry.
When I get out of work jail will write more...
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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Hi Morgana,
I look forward to reading your comments.
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