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I think the flashbacks do a lot of good in establishing why this was so hard for Clark. We see even more of his interactions with Lois and see how it is even harder.
Thank you John for that FDK!!!

I went round and round with one of my beta readers on the issue of the flashbacks. He was of the opinion that they were unnecessary. My other beta and I felt the opposite.

You have vindicated my decision.
My Bberry hiccuped and double posted.
Good Entry.

When I get out of work jail will write more...
Hi Morgana,

I look forward to reading your comments.
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