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FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84732 02/10/12 03:17 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,124 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,124 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia	Comments go here. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84733 02/10/12 04:45 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Good job! I like their banter about things. Get to the lovin. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84734 02/12/12 01:44 PM
Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338 elizabeth Beat Reporter
elizabeth Beat Reporter Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338	Another awesome chapter! Everything is tying together nicely and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter to see what happens next. Cheers Elizabeth

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84735 02/15/12 08:53 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,959 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,959 Likes: 28	Been distracted with quizzes and Kerth reading Quote But she hadn't been able to overcome the feeling that something had divided their lives, leaving her on one side and him on the other. Death did that. Quote "Clark?" Lois said as she walked up to him. "Will you do something for me, please?" Quote "Of course," he said, his gaze glued above her neck. "Will you go to the drugstore?" Ooooooooh! Quote "Condoms." Duh! Quote "Lois ... we need to be careful." "Sure we do," she said. "I really don't think getting pregnant now would be wise. Imagine the difficulties of trying to explain the sudden appearance of a seven-year-old kid when we get back to 1993." Quote "Hurry back, farmboy," she said. "I am not a patient woman." Quote Had he done it? Had he really killed his wife? Yes, and then he went to buy latex gloves so he doesn’t get blood under his fingernails when he cuts the body up. Quote Lois rolled her eyes. Twice. "There's nothing wrong with his wife," she spat. "Mentioning his wife is our signal for, 'We can't talk now because there's somebody nearby who can't be trusted'." Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84736 02/15/12 08:55 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,959 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,959 Likes: 28	Quote Because Robert James was up to something, and she was going to uncover all the sordid details. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84737 02/15/12 11:11 AM
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX A amberlea Columnist
amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	I cannot tell you how relieved I am that Lois is awake and remembers everything! I was certain that Clark was going to be outwitted by the younger Lois, which would mean certain disaster. But I'm also really worried about her, and I'm hoping that you dispatch with Tempus in short order! Amber

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84738 02/20/12 09:02 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,124 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,124 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia	Laura Getting Lois awake and moving Clark away from the horror of watching her die meant we could have a bit of banter. Glad you enjoyed it. Elizabeth Quote Everything is tying together nicely I'm glad you think so because most of the time I was writing this fic, it just seemed to be a lot of threads that wanted nothing to do with each other. Michael Quote /imagines thick cotton nightgown with a turtleneck, extra-long sleeves, and flowing down to the floor/ You got it! Quote /puts money down on Barry/ Amber Quote I was certain that Clark was going to be outwitted by the younger Lois, which would mean certain disaster. There were a lot of reasons why I needed Lois to come with Clark - one of them being that Clark might have been a little out of his depth with this more erratic Lois. He was completely lost before Lois woke up - but I didn't want that to continue for the entire story. Thanks for the FDK. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84739 02/21/12 03:54 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite Features Writer
AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	That about sums up my reaction to a lot of this chapter. Young Lois might be able to take on a bereaved and worried Clark, but a Clark with his wife back and loving him? She'll give them trouble, I'm sure, but she doesn't really stand a chance! Loved how sweet this chapter was--and so nice to see Clark happy and joyous after the horror of the first chapters. "If a smile could swagger, his did." Glad they're not confronting Paul. I still think Barry might be Tempus, maybe trying to play the Boy Scout image since it worked so well for Clark? It'd be interesting to know more of what our Lois's impressions of Barry were. But then, maybe he's just a nice guy, since our Lois admitted she wasn't ready to see anyone like that when she was younger. Looking forward to seeing how this unfolds--so far, this is definitely one of my favorite time-traveling stories!

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 7/16 #84740 02/27/12 12:44 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,124 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,124 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia	AntiK Quote Young Lois might be able to take on a bereaved and worried Clark, but a Clark with his wife back and loving him? 'Being with you ...' Interesting that you see Barry as a sort of Boy Scout/Clark type. Thanks, Corrina.

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