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Ooh, that was nice. Y'know, long stories are good, and A-plots are good, but sometimes I just need a good old-fashioned revelation vignette, and this was a good one.  Why didn’t you tell me in the beginning? When you asked me out, I mean. When we were alone on that boat. That's a good question, Lois <g> Just call him Lunkhead-Man. But this whole section: He cut her off. “There are no more barriers between us, Lois. I promise. Trust me this time...”
He kissed her again, this time more demandingly and passionately.
That kiss was a silent vow.
It was a silent key, opening the doors and breaking the walls between them for good as two became one. WAFFy sigh... lovely. PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Hi, Cute story. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Ahhh, just sweet  Liked it a lot.  Julia
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Julie, I liked this too. Very nice - romantic and WAFFy, with a bit of Lunkhead Clark (TM) thrown in.  There were some spelling/grammar issues, but nothing major, and this will be picked up by your Archive GE in any case... you have sent this to the Archive, haven't you???  Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Thanks, guys... /me blushes  Julie
Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?
(The X-Files)
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Julie A lovely story - very romantic and so WAFFy!  Thanks for sharing it. Tricia 
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Cute and Sweet Julie
merry
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