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Posted By: ChiefPam Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/25/03 09:36 AM
Ooh, that was nice. Y'know, long stories are good, and A-plots are good, but sometimes I just need a good old-fashioned revelation vignette, and this was a good one. smile

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Why didn’t you tell me in the beginning? When you asked me out, I mean. When we were alone on that boat.
That's a good question, Lois <g> Just call him Lunkhead-Man.

But this whole section:

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He cut her off. “There are no more barriers between us, Lois. I promise. Trust me this time...”

He kissed her again, this time more demandingly and passionately.

That kiss was a silent vow.

It was a silent key, opening the doors and breaking the walls between them for good as two became one.
WAFFy sigh... lovely.

PJ
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/25/03 09:44 AM
Hi,

Cute story. smile1
Posted By: Julia Re: Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/25/03 11:34 AM
Ahhh, just sweet laugh

Liked it a lot. thumbsup

Julia
Posted By: Wendymr Re: Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/25/03 11:59 AM
Julie, I liked this too. Very nice - romantic and WAFFy, with a bit of Lunkhead Clark (TM) thrown in. wink

There were some spelling/grammar issues, but nothing major, and this will be picked up by your Archive GE in any case... you have sent this to the Archive, haven't you??? wildguy


Wendy smile
Posted By: Julie S Re: Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/26/03 03:42 PM
Thanks, guys... /me blushes blush

Julie
Posted By: Laurach Re: Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/26/03 05:25 PM
AWWww...sigh. Laura
Posted By: TriciaW Re: Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/27/03 02:52 AM
Julie

A lovely story - very romantic and so WAFFy! goofy

Thanks for sharing it.

Tricia cool
Posted By: merry Re: Comments: Carpe Diem - 11/30/03 09:14 AM
Cute and Sweet Julie
merry
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