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FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (23/37) #82192 09/21/11 08:39 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Please post feedback here. Thank you. *** Green-Eyed Monster TOC Last edited by VirginiaR; 08/04/14 08:56 PM. Reason: Fixed broken Link VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (23/37) #82193 09/22/11 02:47 PM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	I had all this productive and great commentary for this all ready and laid out and then... press two keys by accident and POOF! all gone. Anyways, the basics of it were: I'm glad Lois explained her reasoning better in this chapter (and that Clark actually understood her reasoning- was a little worried about that). Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (23/37) #82194 09/23/11 08:56 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,947 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,947 Likes: 28	Quote Lois slammed down the phone. “Oooh! That woman!” If she never had to talk to Mrs. Cox again, it would still be too soon. “‘I’ll give him the message’,” she quoted the woman in a nasally tone and added a sneer to boot. Doing some legwork in preparation for the party on Friday? Quote She wondered if her old tennis partner’s dad, Louie, could help. Angela had always said her dad knew guys who knew guys. Well, it did work for the other Lois. Quote If she told the reclusive billionaire CEO that he had an employee who was trying to blackmail her for those ludicrous stealing charges – she wasn’t planning on mentioning Clark or Perry – then maybe Tempus would be fired for sexual harassment or employee misconduct before their Saturday ‘date’. Yes. Long shot. But it would get Tempus off her tail. Given Lex doesn't want to go where his lower-end-of-totempole employees have already been. Quote She had glanced at the microwave clock in the kitchen – 1:36 a.m. They took the TV but not the microwave? Oh, it's a built in one, right? US-style? Quote Lois had looked through her peephole and saw Superman, not Clark. Her heart had plummeted. That's clever. Quote Until he does, you’re not allowed to even kiss this side of him. She could. It might just confuse things. And require angry make-up sex. Quote She had gone into the kitchen and gotten him a glass of water, wishing she had something better, like juice or wine or anything. A hot shower. And a back-rub? Quote “I’d rather not.” Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (23/37) #82195 09/23/11 08:06 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	MouseRocks: Thank you for the comments. Yes, L&C communication is finally starting to hit its stride. Steamy? Isn't your laundry done that way? Glad you enjoyed. Remember, this Clark doesn't have the media background that canon Clark does. He didn't think anyone would be stalking her house at 3am. He'll learn to be more careful in the future. Michael: Thank you for the massive comments! Yes, the microwave is built in... plus it's an older model, the thieves wouldn't have gotten much on the street for it. Quote So, because some Wacko told her how things will turn out, she's rather choosing some other slob and unhappiness, a divorce, some other slob and another divorce, just to prove a point? Well, she is Lois. And Lois = Stubborn. Quote Oh dear. So, if that had continued longer, would it have counted as their first time? Clark couldn't leave, because she was holding on to him so tightly... but she didn't figure this out. Of course, Clark didn't explain it well either. Quote Well, Lois's are known for breaking their own rules. Who? Lois? Nah! Quote Ooops? Did he just make a bad booboo? Who? Clark? Booboo? Nah! Quote Spycam in the shower? Close, but no Clarkie bear. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

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