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"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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 What a twist. At least Clark seems to be recovering. Love the green eggs and ham references.  Joan
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LOL got to love an out of it Clark spouting out Green eggs and ham LOL
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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OMG!  What if I beg like Moose asking for a treat? 
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I liked the Dr. Seuss reference when Clark was all loopy from the pain meds! 
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WARNING: The tenor of the fic turns dark here and there is a WHAM coming.  “I won’t lie to you anymore, Lois. I’ll tell you the truth one hundred percent.”
Lois nodded. Her eyes flickered in interest. “One hundred percent?” So, is she already planning on how to make him suffer with the truth? Lois took his hand again and squeezed it just a bit. “I do. I like them, Sam-I-Am.” Looks like she's decided that some bullets are more important than others. Also, it feels like it's already sort of tied up. Except for Nigel knowing. He still needs to drink some poison. Part 7? Michael PS: The WHAM warning was very mean. Clark only got a exposed to Kryptonite and a teeny tiny bit shot. Nobody suffered any permanent damage or ran off to marry Dan or something. You had me lot's of scared there. 
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PS: The WHAM warning was very mean. Clark only got a exposed to Kryptonite and a teeny tiny bit shot. Nobody suffered any permanent damage or ran off to marry Dan or something. You had me lot's of scared there. /shuffles feet in embarrassment/ Well, it *is* a total change in the tenor of the fic... and it *is* gratuitous violence... so the WHAM warning. Have no fear, Moose will reappear!
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 Maybe we need an A-plot warning, too Michael
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*Bump* /looking around for part 7/ 
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
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Somehow I missed this part. Like the plot twist with Nigel. Was NOT expecting that. I have to tell you, I was cracking up laughing throughout the second half of this part. Clark on pain meds was SOOOO hilarious!
Perry: (To Lois) Honey, this could be greatest story since Superman came to town. By-the-by, where is that husband of yours?
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 I did NOT see that one coming. WTH Moose? Protect the people who are feeding you!!! I hope Clark recovers fully. Does he still have Kryptonite in his blood stream? Or was the exposure that bad? He usually recovers pretty quick once the green rock is away from him. And seriously LMAO over the drugged up Clark. Also, I find this mildly funny, but this chapter of Chocolate Lab was enjoyed with an orange tabby on my chest.
Battle On,
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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