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Posted By: IolantheAlias FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/06/11 10:26 PM
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Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/07/11 10:50 AM
eek eek eek

That bullet came out of nowhere! We were having a nice little story about Lois being mad at Clark and a dog mixed in and then...
mecry

And WHAT'S UP WITH MOOSE? Some guard dog he is, NOT!
Posted By: scifiJoan Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/07/11 11:14 AM
eek What a twist. At least Clark seems to be recovering. Love the green eggs and ham references. smile1

Joan
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/07/11 12:00 PM
LOL got to love an out of it Clark spouting out Green eggs and ham LOL
Posted By: mozartmaid Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/07/11 03:12 PM
OMG! hyper What if I beg like Moose asking for a treat? laugh
Posted By: DW Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/08/11 10:53 AM
I liked the Dr. Seuss reference when Clark was all loopy from the pain meds! smile1

smile
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/09/11 03:48 AM
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WARNING: The tenor of the fic turns dark here and there is a WHAM coming.
rotflol

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“I won’t lie to you anymore, Lois. I’ll tell you the truth one hundred percent.”

Lois nodded. Her eyes flickered in interest. “One hundred percent?”
So, is she already planning on how to make him suffer with the truth?

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Lois took his hand again and squeezed it just a bit. “I do. I like them, Sam-I-Am.”
Looks like she's decided that some bullets are more important than others. Also, it feels like it's already sort of tied up. Except for Nigel knowing. He still needs to drink some poison.

Part 7?

Michael

PS: The WHAM warning was very mean. Clark only got a exposed to Kryptonite and a teeny tiny bit shot. Nobody suffered any permanent damage or ran off to marry Dan or something. You had me lot's of scared there. cat
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/09/11 10:19 PM
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PS: The WHAM warning was very mean. Clark only got a exposed to Kryptonite and a teeny tiny bit shot. Nobody suffered any permanent damage or ran off to marry Dan or something. You had me lot's of scared there.
/shuffles feet in embarrassment/

Well, it *is* a total change in the tenor of the fic... and it *is* gratuitous violence... so the WHAM warning.

Have no fear, Moose will reappear!
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/10/11 06:12 AM
blush Maybe we need an A-plot warning, too laugh

Michael
Posted By: mozartmaid Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/11/11 05:31 AM
*Bump*

/looking around for part 7/ peep
Posted By: lcfan99 Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/12/11 07:40 PM
Somehow I missed this part. smile

Like the plot twist with Nigel. Was NOT expecting that.

I have to tell you, I was cracking up laughing throughout the second half of this part. Clark on pain meds was SOOOO hilarious!
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Chocolate Lab 6/9 - 06/18/11 06:44 PM
jawdrop jawdrop jawdrop jawdrop

I did NOT see that one coming. WTH Moose? Protect the people who are feeding you!!!

I hope Clark recovers fully. Does he still have Kryptonite in his blood stream? Or was the exposure that bad? He usually recovers pretty quick once the green rock is away from him.

And seriously LMAO over the drugged up Clark.

Also, I find this mildly funny, but this chapter of Chocolate Lab was enjoyed with an orange tabby on my chest.
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