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fdbck: Double Helixes 21 #7773 11/10/03 12:52 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken OP Top Banana
OP CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	Jaxie, So much good stuff in this part. I adore the humor sprinkled throughout. Over-protective Clark who doesn't want Linda sitting anywhere on Jimmy and is tempted to rip the door from the hinges. I love the 'did we just get the door closed in our faces?' line. Really, a nice reversal of all the times Jimmy interrupted them. Also, Perry and the Kents...this is all moving along nicely. A fun and interesting read. CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: fdbck: Double Helixes 21 #7774 11/10/03 06:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA rivka Merriwether
rivka Merriwether Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,587 Los Angeles, CA, USA	Yes! Really great segment. One of my favorite lines: Quote “So have you turned up anything yet?” Perry's gruff voice ended the moment as effectively as a stampede of dachshunds. All in all, this section had lots of fun, lots of funny, and was waffy too. sighs happily Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly. - Under the Tuscan Sun

Re: fdbck: Double Helixes 21 #7775 11/10/03 10:59 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: fdbck: Double Helixes 21 #7776 11/10/03 12:57 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Jaxie great part lots of fun merry

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